Sunday, October 12, 2008

The Power of Persuasion ... at Any Age


Everyone has heard the age old maxim, "practice makes perfect." In innumerable cases, this maxim proves its truthfulness, time and time again. However, no one has ever heard this maxim put this way: "practice makes perfect, only at a certain age." That is a bit odd, isn't it? It's also, as Diane Downer Anderson maintains, false, especially when discussing the idea of introducing the genre of persuasive writing to elementary aged kids. In Anderson's essay, "The Elementary Persuasive Letter: Two Cases of Situated Competence, Strategy, and Agency," the argument that elementary aged children don't have the ability to write persuasive texts is felled, and then, Anderson starts to enumerate all the ways in which introducing the persuasive writing genre to elementary school children is successful, as long as certain teaching strategies are in place.

One of the first points that Anderson maintains, in Research in the Teaching of English, is that, "Elementary persuasive writing is a powerful genre because it is a scaffold to argumentative writing in high school and college ...." (271). This is probably the most salient point. As a teacher of nine years, I've witnessed first hand what introducing and practicing a concept does for students. It does not matter so much what age something is taught, as how it is taught, and what tools are being used to drive the concept home. Anderson underlines the importance of this when she states, " ... wrting persuasive letters suggests that teachers who include persuasive writing in their curricula and scaffold such writing through talk, explicit forms, and topics on which children have much to say will find that children dsplay competence in their persuasive thinking and writing" (271).

The idea of introducing a concept and supporting it with things such as graphic organizers, class discussions, outside ideas that have parallels to the topic at hand, and explaining why the particular topic is an important one, are all examples of what Anderson calls "explicit forms," and why these forms should be considered appropriate only at a certain age is hard to understand. I taught high school, and if I did not introduce and practice these forms explicitly, my high school students would have had the same difficulty a third grader might possibly have with persuasive writing. Although the fallacy of persuasive writing at a certain age is obviously wrong, strong teachers with best teaching practices should be given to students of every age.

Persuasive writing should be introduced, made explicit, and practiced many times in elementary school. And knowing that "Persuasive writing is the primary genre on which students will be assessed as writers ... culminating in a written essay on the Scholastic Achievement Test ...." (273), shouldn't we as educators and parents demand that persuasive writing should be in the curriculum long before kids enter junior high and high school? I think so.

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Wednesday, October 1, 2008

Lucky Number ... Six?

Writing is not as hard as you might think it is. Really. All it takes is some effort and some know-how. I can help you with both. Teaching and tutoring English for a number of years has given me the opportunity to train with a multitude of methods that all have beneficial effects on a student's writing. As one quickly learns in the area of writing, what seems like an abstract, ephemeral process can be turned into something that is concrete, doable, and most of all, writable. And, that, Ladies and Gentlemen, is where six, does indeed, become your lucky number. Really.
It has nothing to do with games of chance, the same suite of five, or three "sevens" matching across a quarter slot game. It does, however, have everything to do with a thing called the Six Traits of Writing. And what are they? A group of teachers came together and graded many pieces of student writing (hey, some things in life never change). As a result of their collaborative grading, they came up with six traits of writing that strong papers in the pool all had, as a unifying theme: ideas and content, mechanics, word choice, organization, voice, and sentence fluency. What developed out of this collaboration can help your student become a skilled writer. Really.
So, here is the breakdown of the six traits: each trait is graded on a scale of one to six, with six being the highest. What is also given under each score is some written text that exemplies, for better or for worse, what makes a score what it is. There is a total of six numbers, and those numbers are then averaged for a score that ranges anywhere from a zero (the student wrote nothing) to six (highly improbably, but it has happened). Aiming for a total score of four to five is a goal that can be reached. Really. So, how do you get your student there?
Well, hiring a tutor that has a mastery of the English language, but also, who has a mastery of the types of rubrics school districts are using is a step in the right direction. Taking writing step by step, in addition to teaching the traits in chunks, can solidify an exemplary writing model that your student can use in any classroom. Since many students have difficulty with developing and elaborating ideas, I usually start tutoring with the trait of "ideas," and show them with graphic organizers, with the recalling of prior knowledge into other subjects that they know, and with showing them the cause/effect relationships their own ideas have, how to turn a one sentence wonder into a beautifully substantial paragraph with innumerable possibilities for discussion and thought. All it takes is the introduction of the process and some practice.
Really.
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For more information about the six traits (now Six Traits +1), please visit www.nwrel.org.